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Neat series I didn't know I was missing out on!

This is so well done and I can tell a lot of work and production has been put into every minute. Would love to see more of your work in the future!

Really like the art style and animation of the video!

Recent Game Reviews

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For a game made in 48 hours this is actually really impressive. Unique idea & gameplay, decent logic to solving each level, and from what I can tell a pretty bug-free experience (had some odd collision after combining two of those 3-platform pieces in level 10 or 11). Keep up the awesome work!

I kinda like the game, pretty neat with a really cool aesthetic going on here. Only suggestions are related to the letter pairs and shop.
At first I thought any word containing the listed letters would suffice (eg. pair being sw, 'sword' would work, 'words' would work) but found that was not the case. I think it would be cool if we could craft words with the letters in any order as that would give some additional flexibility. I also found the pairs would repeat somewhat frequently which isn't bad but I ended up re-using words from session to session.
For the shop - I played through 3-4 games and had enough credit to purchase the time upgrade. Pricing on the other items seems a little high as I'd need to play a dozen or more times to unlock some of the upgrades. I feel like some of the gameplay upgrades would be fun to play around with but I don't know if I'll be sticking around with the dozen or so times needed to unlock them. Maybe to keep the grind going have some cosmetics available to unlock for the higher prices (shop cat as the typing mascot / different color backgrounds / etc)?

Overall pretty neat game!

lightcatdev responds:

Hey, thanks for the feedback! I'm going to try to get an update out soon with all that in mind. Your idea of "I think it would be cool if we could craft words with the letters in any order as that would give some additional flexibility." Is honestly an amazing idea, I definitely will be adding that in the next update. I will be lowering the prices of items as well, I always did think they were a little expensive, and this gave me confirmation. Thanks for your feedback dude! I appreciate you! :)

Glad you enjoyed the game!

A very interesting concept for a clicker/incremental game, just not a big fan of how slow it is and how upgrades/progression isn't too well explained from the start (I can see the medals but am a bit afraid to ask how many books it'll take for that one achievement + am not sure how selling books for $7 in the beginning translates to legislation). I made it about 4-5 books in before writing this and am not too sure how the ghostwriter is helping me.
My other main criticism is the lack of immersion or 'pazazz'. While the text is written it would be cool to hear a typewriter or pen writing on paper for example. Maybe after a book is completed a 'thud' or closing of a book sound is played. Beyond sound improvements to the visuals would be cool. I see this is a game jam submission so understand there's a time crunch but wanted to offer some suggestions and things i think may make this a bit better.

TyrOvC responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

Recent Audio Reviews

3 Audio Reviews

Love it! Can tell a lot of work has been put into this.

FelixZophar responds:

Thanks man!

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Your inbox is full, and I have been unable to reply to you. This is the only way I can think to contact you, so sorry for this unrelated comment.

Recent Art Reviews

39 Art Reviews

Really awesome work

Looks awesome, great art and style!

Looks cozy

Chefrens responds:

Yup and specially with the hot chocolate

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